Week 4

Wen I was three I went with my mom to a park. It had no water it was hotter than the desert! I looked around and Thar was a river. It looked at it and I never Sean a river so dry in my life. It was so cooler than my mom eating sardines. I felt hot and so excited. Me and my momma went to get lemonade and sprite to drink. I told her about it and she said “no it is not true sweetie” and I said “mom it is the truth!” And she said “love you sweetie.”




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  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Sage. I can see the effort you have put into spelling words by including all the sounds you can hear. It gets very tricky when sounds can be made by different combinations of letters. Perhaps you could ask a friend to help you edit for spelling before you publish. I love that you are using similes so your reader can picture your text easily. I enjoyed reading your writing. 🙏😊

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