Week 30

One day I was Just watching TV. On the TV I saw A weird thing. So I came up to my mom and pause the TV. I sed “what is this mechanical device?” And pointed at the TV she sed “I don’t know.” So we both went up to dad and ask him “what is this strange mechanical device.” He responded “ I don’t know.” So me my mom and dad FaceTime my grandpa And sed “ What is this?” He responded “ I don’t know ask grandma.” And so we did and she sed “It’s an old fashion ironing thing.” The end.

2 thoughts on “Week 30

  1. hi sage I liked your writing but said was spelt incorrectly and I needed to read it a copal of times to find the iron.
    but over all I liked the story.

  2. Kia ora Sage. I really enjoyed reading your 100 Word Challenge – well done. It’s great that you got to the bottom of what that strange object was. Good on Grandma! And well done for including so much dialogue in your story. It can be tricky to get the correct punctuation, but you did a great job. Keep up the super writing Sage.

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